Please help me with this......!!!!?

"Are creepy" would fit properly. "We found a nice place to set up the tents we bought last summer".... "I decided to make lunch while Nick put up the tents".... "Wanna have some?", "sure, just a second" he grumbled. Your story is nice, it starts to take me somewhere!. The layout tends to be "wordy", but I do like where it is leading. Get some old Edgar Rice-Burrows or Robert Howard novels and check your descriptive lines with theirs. Both had a wonderful ability to draw you into a scene without wordy descriptions. Good Luck!.