Song i wrote help me ..what do you think of the song?

[song] today is a beautiful day the sun shines so bright then it goes away ..the moon comes out the stars are up lets see the stars its a beautiful day ..its a beautiful night.. [chorus] you are just like a beautiful day ,you shine so bright you are so sweet and kind you are just like a beautiful night ,romantic,very loveable beautiful day and beautiful night [end chorus] verse 2: on a beautiful day lets go to a picnic ..on a beautiful night we sit on the gr lets watch the sky lets see the stars ,lets named them [chorus] you are just like a beautiful day ,you shine so bright you are so sweet and kind you are just like a beautiful night ,romantic,very loveable beautiful day and beautiful night [end chorus] [chorus] you are just like a beautiful day ,you shine so bright you are so sweet and kind you are just like a beautiful night ,romantic,very loveable beautiful day and beautiful night [end chorus] [chorus] you are just like a beautiful day ,you shine so bright you are so sweet and kind you are just like a beautiful night ,romantic,very loveable beautiful day and beautiful night [chorus] you are just like a beautiful day ,you shine so bright you are so sweet and kind you are just like a beautiful night ,romantic,very loveable beautiful day and beautiful night [end chorus] lets hold hands .lets have fun. feel the breeze